Like Queen, you want it all. You want expert feedback on story elements and your prose all in one, like one glorious editing mashup of style and substance. You want comments that tackle character issues and ones that cover word choice.
This is your edit.
You'll get an editorial memo chock full of suggestions for improving your writing and strengthening your story and characters. Suggestions that respect your intentions and stay true to your writing style. Plus you'll get a line-edited manuscript that addresses things like repetition and awkward sentences. After your edit, I'm available for questions/brainstorming for as long as you need.